Random, but good!
Very nice job, that likely takes a while. Also like the little amateur editing!
Perhaps add some more editing to stand out a little more with these kind of videos. Otherwise, solid walkthrough.
Pretty nice editing job there.
Sounds a little bland in my opinion. Perhaps add some more variations in the song.
Nice song pick, you'll need to up the volume and perhaps try and get some better recording tools though.
Add some better music that isn't this subtle, perhaps some editing work here and there. It's hard to stand out as there are a lot of these.
Perhaps add a little bit of music, something calm and relaxing and speed it up a little (Or rather cut out some bits here and there)
Music is a little too loud, video overall was dragged out too long. Try and make it shorter/faster.