This is the best video of yours I've seen yet. I might suggest doing this song in a higher key. It sounds like you're a little uncomfortable in your lower range, but you have a good tone and the power starts to come out in your mid and upper ranges.

Good stuff. Good pitch accuracy and guitar accompaniment. Enunciation could use a bit of work, but overall very good.

Gonna have to call this paradoxically Good and Bad at the same time. The performance seems to be good, from what we can hear, but the video quality is obviously... lacking.

Very solid guitar track, actually seems well recorded too. The vox aren't great, but I would call them better than average. Good job.

Random, but alright, why not?

Very abstract, to the extent of lacking tangible flow and direction. I sense a small portion of what you meant to convey, but it's unclear overall. Perhaps this is what you intended, but I would suggest more explicit story. I would also avoid looping of animations for as long as they are in this piece.

Good, but I would recommend allowing less dead space in the video (where you're not talking). Additionally, some of the cuts were a little abrupt.

Dig it. Good gangsta sh*t.