from camp rock right ? aww you're really good =) hmmm ever thought instead of having lyrics that perhaps it'd be nice if we could see you sing ? you'd probably have more views that way :P keep working hard ! :D xxx
hmmmmmmm this is quite good, but idk , i think it just needs to slot together more if that makes sense ... also the chorus is slightly too changed for my taste , i want to hear the tone of your voice shine through more .. it gets really good towards the end =) keep working hard !!!!!